2012-06-26

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2012-06-26 12:18 pm

4th Street 2012: The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly

This year's writers workshop went very well (the workshop can be kind of hit-or-miss). I signed up not sure if it would do much for me, but because it was a thing that I wanted to continue. I ended up feeling like I got my money's worth in spades (and hearts, clubs, and diamonds). I should mention that the sandwiches provided were also fantastic (2 kinds of ham, salami, provolone, mozzarella, and olive relish, served with pickled okra); I could have eaten twice as much. Apparently all workshop spots sold out, which I was delighted to hear. Now if only we could get some editor pitch sessions started....

4th Street was in a different hotel, Spring Hill Suites. The conveniences of the suites were nice, but the hotel did feel too small for the convention. The consuite area with the food became cramped, though we also had extra space to hang out in the breakfast area. There was no hotel restaurant. There was no hotel bar (the better to buy editors drinks, my dear!). We had a free breakfast for everyone instead of a decadent brunch. I miss the decadent brunch. The decadent brunch was awesome.

There was no merchandise area. I don't miss this much, but it seems unfortunate that authors in attendance didn't have a place where somebody was willing to sell their books on consignment. That is a thing that seems useful, particularly since an "authors in attendance" sign implies "authors willing to sign their books, so you should totally buy them now." I was surprised by a couple of people bringing the MinnSpec anthology over to me to sign, and I can only presume that for some people that's part of the point of conventions. Maybe 4th Street organizers could do something like this? Though I suppose it would take an extra volunteer, and those are in short supply.

The programming was more diverse. [livejournal.com profile] alecaustin did a fantastic job of keeping it from being the same people talking all the time. Somebody said that none of the panelists were on more than two panels, and that seems about right. Some of the loudest voices from previous years were much more . . . balanced, shall we say. As somebody else said, the first few reunion 4th Streets felt a bit like stumbling into somebody else's class reunion. All the class members are very excited to see each other and talk to each other, but people who weren't part of that class feel like the party really wasn't for them. That's not an effective way to make those other people want to come back to a convention. There was less of that this time around, with one notable exception.

rant
At one point, Steven said something to the effect of, "We're running out of time, so I'm going to call on the important people in the audience first and then I'll get to the rest of you who have your hand up."

It may have been true, for certain values of "important," but that is irrelevant. It may have been said in a joking tone, but that is also irrelevant. It was rude and alienating. I desperately wanted to shout: "Oy! Don't be a dick to your audience!" Alas, in writing circles I am generally trying to hold back on smacking anyone down until I have a bit more published heft to back it up. Me! Exhibiting restraint! Everybody who knows me personally may now gasp in shock.
/rant

An auction was added in the intermission between panels, to raise funds for future 4th Streets. I could happily watch the very funny Ellen Klages auction things off for hours. Just sayin'. Things auctioned included hand-knitted items, a delicious Norske Nook rhubarb pie, a poker game, a fireman's hat, signed tentacles, a Singer bowl to be created to your specifications and coated with a glaze incorporating soil from Neil Gaiman's yard (the most tempting auction item for me, and the one most out of my price range!), handmade jewelry with a name and a story seed, and an as-yet-unpublished manuscript of MRK's new work. I want this to be a tradition--as long as Ellen is the auctioneer.

I wasn't part of conversations about writing. It just didn't really come up as a topic, which was somewhat disappointing. The exception is the random explanation of deconstruction that happened in the hallway, where I added my $.02 about expositive deconstruction versus destructive deconstruction. That was fun.

It may be a psychological thing: in a bigger convention, many of us expect to disappear into the crowd and not really connect with people who aren't already more on the friend side of the stranger->acquaintance->friend sliding scale; in a smaller, more intimate convention, it is easier to feel rebuffed when you don't connect with people outside of your own narrow group. Some of those who have been attending for a couple of years have naturally formed into groups of friends that, en masse, act as an introvert would--i.e. not being outgoing towards others (though they may have complained in the past about others doing the same!). This includes the local Minnesota writers group that I'm in. Heading for familiar faces is just more comfortable. I had a goal of always having a meal with at least one different person included, and it was damn difficult. A couple of people I would have liked to see at 4th Street decided not to go because they felt excluded, and I would not like to be a contributing factor to that in someone else. Edited for making unduly sweeping statements. I hate to sweep unduly.

Part of my difficulty may have been caused by me always having to flee during breaks to take care of the baby, of course. No lingering and chatting! On the other hand, a new attendee told me that I was the first person he didn't already know at least vaguely who gave him the time of day. This was after a couple of days of convention, if I recall correctly. Now, that ain't right. That doesn't even qualify as the much-maligned Minnesota nice.

Something must be done.

I think a "newcomers' lunch" would be a good start, whether that means hauling them all off to a buffet together on the first meal break or arranging a sit-down catered dinner for new people and people who want to talk to new people--maybe with some sort of randomized seating order and a pro writer at each table? Or maybe that should be done with everyone to get them all talking right from Day 1. I suppose the writers workshop sort of did that for those who attended that part, but I don't think seating etc. was randomized to promote social expansion.

Or maybe "Lunch with X and Y" groups going out to grab a bite, where X and Y are panelists and the rest are attendees . . . but you'd have to limit the groups, plus panelists do want to socialize with each other too, so it would all get complicated fast.

Still, I feel the need for some kind of mixer. Place to start: newcomers' lunch.
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2012-06-26 05:52 pm

4th St: Writer's Seminar

These are my panel notes. I don't transcribe the panel, I just write down the bits that caught my attention. Some of these notes are thoughts the panel inspired, not things the panel actually discussed. I don't attribute because I can never remember who said what!

Writer's Seminar: Storytelling

How to Sound Professional

If you want your profession to sound respectable, be more specific (not just "writer," but "science fiction writer" or "dark fantasy writer") and insert "professional" in front of it.

Big-Picture Plotting

SF/Fantasy needs something in it that is significant to the created world, not just to the main character.

Using Description and Body Language to Show Emotion and Thought

Focus on focus. The order of description affects the reader. What the character looks at first tells what they are thinking, and the length of time they look at it conveys their emotional reaction, whether it is a long considering stare or a quickly averted glance.

A useful metaphor is to consider fiction writing as seeing a play from the back of the house, in terms of how to describe body language. In other words, excessive head-bobbing is meaningless motion.

Types of movement:
* Aggressive - leaning in, moving toward
* Regressive - moving away from
* Passive - remaining in place

Movement + Action = Emotional Context

Meaningful movement can also describe a space and the props in it, allowing you to avoid describing it all in a blob later.

Reading Aloud - Storytelling

When you're telling a story, use direct links to audience appearance or actions to involve them, i.e. getting the audience to make gestures with you or giving a personal 2nd person comparison like, "Your hair will be thin like this too if you live long enough." Make it very specific and fact-/action-based and 2nd person.

Include onomatopoeia and directly describe sounds instead of using metaphor and simile, i.e. the ching-ching of a light chain.

Lure the listener in with sympathizeable, everyday stuff linked to tactile memory and then take it a step further into the speculative.

Put a tie-back at the end to reference the beginning. Even better if you can work in a reference in the middle too. People get a little burst of brain-pleasure when the pattern completes.

What an Editor Wants

"An editor's job is making a thing more of what it is."

Narrow and choose the opening to cue which possible story path is being taken. You really, really need to cue the editor in from the very beginning, because they naturally think of the ten variations they usually see and try to figure out which one it is.

Keep in mind that you're not just performing the story in your head; you're working with an editor to excavate the best story it can be deep-down.

Back cover copy should distill how you're going to feel at the end, without giving away the plot--it is not supposed to be an accurate summary.

Beware enforcing the mediocre in workshops. Wild talent comes in and turns things sideways. (Of course, there's also confusing the hell out of everyone when you come in sideways, which may not be useful.... Le sigh.) Don't try to homogenize your voice.

Part of the publishing industry's difficulties is the death of "mass market" publishing--meaning the rack of books in the gas station or the grocery store. Can the digital revolution save publishing? Can a cover and a photo scan to download a book and give the store a cut work? How can we get books back in stores? This is something to think about when I get a book published. Maybe it's worth taking a hundred copies at author's discount and trying to figure something out (but not in that order).

Some editors like to be involved from the very beginning (the plotting stage). When you get a book deal, check with the editor to see when they like to get involved with the next thing.


Character Death

Make even minor character deaths meaningful through character sketches--and yes, it is in fact cheating to only kill minor characters.

This may make a positive pull-through even more important, but figure out what it is and calculate the throw-at-wall factor of killing the pull-through.

Retelling a Story and Making It Yours

If you're trying to retell a story, look for the bits that speak to you or that you sympathize with, and expand those.

If you have two plot options, go with the one that is more emotionally loaded for you as the author (while avoiding cliches).

If you're worried about what people might think, you've chosen the right option.

... but just because you're squeezing emotional blood out onto the page does not mean you're doing it right. It really doesn't. You have to do everything else right too.

What is the unique thing that you can do, whether as a storyteller or because of the genre or medium you're moving the original thing into? Doing that thing is what will make it good. For example, what can a science fiction love story do that other love stories cannot?

What is the unique thing that you cannot do? Don't even try. Figure out some way to make not doing it a good stylistic choice. The weaknesses of a genre can also be key.

"If you can't fix it, feature it." - theatre saying.

(All my 4th Street Fantasy 2012 posts.)