ext_139226 ([identity profile] tesla-aldrich.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] abracanabra 2010-03-29 06:11 pm (UTC)

I love the photo and I think it's great for the story, not to mention being striking and making me want to pick up whatever it might be attached to.

I do agree with the above comments that the text could benefit from some tuning, but I'm not good at graphic design, so no specific suggestions here.

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