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Writing Log
Jul. 18th, 2008 02:46 pmWednesday (Thursday I worked a full day, so nothing got done.)
"Tree of Life" Writing Log
Words: 522
Total words: 8,220
Overused word: fish
Gratuitous word: bobbed
Type of scene: Fail
Challenge(s): Writing a mental process in subtle actions instead of explicit thoughts. It's something I need to work on doing more. Also, difficult!
Which line is it anyways?Dying, it writhed against the cage of his fingers.
Notes: I need to write faster, stronger--[looks at clock]--earlier.
Other writingy stuff:
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penthius freewriting, a low-potential food tasting for aliens.
"Tree of Life" Writing Log
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8,220 / 80,000 (10.3%) |
Words: 522
Total words: 8,220
Overused word: fish
Gratuitous word: bobbed
Type of scene: Fail
Challenge(s): Writing a mental process in subtle actions instead of explicit thoughts. It's something I need to work on doing more. Also, difficult!
Which line is it anyways?Dying, it writhed against the cage of his fingers.
Notes: I need to write faster, stronger--[looks at clock]--earlier.
Other writingy stuff:
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penthius freewriting, a low-potential food tasting for aliens.