1700 / 900 = 1.88x longer AKA 'a lot'

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"Bed of Roses - Long Version" Writing Log

1,700 / 1,700 (100.0%)

Writing work periods completed: 3
Total words: 1,700
Reason for length: Expanded from original length of 900 words because of request to "expand and resubmit"
Overused word: Duh. 'Rose'
Gratuitous word: drycleaners
Type of story: You could call it 'romance'.
Challenge(s): Finding synonyms.
Which line is it anyways?Thorns dug into his flesh, but they were only goads driving him forward.
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Notes: A couple of days of downtime for this, an edit, and then it'll be off to the great wonderful land of Resubmissions--someplace I've never gone before.