Writing Log: Vicesteed Chapter 14
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abracanabra03/27/2009 - Friday, full work
Surely I did something?
03/26/2009 - Thursday, no work
* Read WritersWeekly newsletter.
* Posted writing log.
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penthius freewriting, "Newshunter."
* Wrote 3-sentence pitch for Book In A Nutshell Contest (http://knightagency.blogspot.com/2009/03/enter-tkas-book-in-nutshell-competition.html) and posted it to get feedback.
* Finished redmarking and made editing changes to Vicesteed, ch. 14.
Deleted from Chapter 14
Old chapter wordcount: 5,198
New chapter wordcount: 4,021
Vicesteed Draft 1 wordcount: 207,877
Vicesteed Draft 2 current wordcount: 178,412
Notes: This was a pretty minimal edit (for me). I mostly cleared out redundancies and excessive flushing.
Reason for deleting scene: See previous comment about excessive flushing.
Which deleted scene is it anyway?
Surely I did something?
03/26/2009 - Thursday, no work
* Read WritersWeekly newsletter.
* Posted writing log.
*
penthius freewriting, "Newshunter."* Wrote 3-sentence pitch for Book In A Nutshell Contest (http://knightagency.blogspot.com/2009/03/enter-tkas-book-in-nutshell-competition.html) and posted it to get feedback.
* Finished redmarking and made editing changes to Vicesteed, ch. 14.
Deleted from Chapter 14
Old chapter wordcount: 5,198
New chapter wordcount: 4,021
Vicesteed Draft 1 wordcount: 207,877
Vicesteed Draft 2 current wordcount: 178,412
Notes: This was a pretty minimal edit (for me). I mostly cleared out redundancies and excessive flushing.
Reason for deleting scene: See previous comment about excessive flushing.
Which deleted scene is it anyway?
Her flush was turning into a veritable blaze. She wanted him to go back to acting normal, to stop embarrassing her. She wanted him to never stop saying such sweet things.